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130 (1) Thorium-232 and 238U Uranium-238 decay through a series of radionuclides to stable isotopes…
168 (6) ‘operations with and storage of materials not usually regarded as radioactive, but which contain significant traces of natural radionuclides’:
uniform use of the quotation marks! “” or `` (for the entire document)
285 (20) Eearth
312 (22) reuse or re-use
Uniform use of wording for the entire document (e.g. Line 993 and 997)!
398 (30) By-products and residues from a one industry involving NORM
447 (34) ICRP, 20014a
496 (41) of dose or the application of special working procedures is needed for radiological protection purposes., In …
558 (49) … and reasonable attitude (see ICRP (2018)).
uniform citation style (ICRP, 2018)
701 (68) … breathing rates (see ICRP (2017)).
uniform citation style (ICRP, 2017)
701 (68) , if Radon mitigation …
consistency, “radon” so far written in small letters
812 (87) The definition of ILO should be given!
Annex A “Geothermal energy production” and the “use” of thermal brines and “deep water” should be mentioned. Pumping of mine water (e.g. coal mining) can also lead to radioactive scale inside the tubes.