i. Emergency response or the need for speed in both decision and action. It is noted in relation
Implementation of early urgent countermeasures following radiological accidents, radiation
protection practice already has an example of different ethical decisions in an emergency
situation
ii. Societal v individual benefit. Biomedical ethics allows immunisation of individuals with little
or no risk of mortality, to protect those at risk; eg. Whooping cough vaccination of 2 year olds.
iii. The concept of realistic medicine. Which is perhaps the logical endpoint of some of the
papers discussion of empowerment.
iv, Resources. On a world scale healthcare is invariably practiced with inadequate resources in
terms of equipment staff and training. This is a common finding in radiation aspects of
medicine. There is scope to consider this specifically in the paper.
5. Some like Nicolas Foray actively involved in the field have adopted the nomenclature of
radiosensivity to tissue reactions from treatment, and radiosuceptability for radiation induced
second cancers, and indeed in relation to occupational risk. I think this system has some
merit. Given the potential importance of development in this area I suggest the paper needs
further discussion here and I could not agree that current radiosensivity testing clinically is
limited to monogenetic disorders. The issues must at least be include as a risk “we do not yet
fully understand”
6. I think I have some understanding as to why spoof names were used for case examples in the
draft, however I would advise their removal. Firstly they are very Western orientated and it is
important that the paper is thought off as universal in ethical derivation. Secondly despite
their spoof nature there are probably huge numbers of actual people with similar names who
could take offence and indeed legal action. I would certainly suggest some legal advice before
publication if they are to be retained
7. A number of the cases relate to actions by none radiation professionals. Case also include,
almost as an absolute statement, the results of ethical considerations of other modalities.
Surely the phases “not an option “or “not viable” are the end stages of an ethical evaluation of
another modality. Is not the actual requirement here for there to be some combined evaluation
aware of the potential detriments of all modalities rather than passing patients on to another
specialty purely on the basis of single modality assessments.
8. Given my previous comment on lack of resource, for inclusiveness and to enhance relevance
it is suggested that there should be examples of isolated rural deprived practice.
9. An important and universal aspect of RP is the need for local rules as the mechanism of
delivering effective radiological safety. Should not the paper make mention of the delivery of
Ethical practice by compliance with these rules. In fact some of the examples would not arise if
appropriate rules were in place. This fits well with the papers use of Taxonomy of Learning with
staff trained to the Understanding level undertaking ethical practice based on local rule
compliance.
10. The paper spends some time discussing RP training, without any further definition, other than
recommendations to include some consideration of ethics. In my view the RP training can be
usefully divided into 3 for almost all people involved. Crucially it needs to include the hazard.
This in my experience is often omitted in worker training, though I think worker’s compliance
with protection requirements is much better if they have a sound hazard knowledge, secondly
training should include the basics of principles of RP, before moving on to the specifics of RP
for this particular practice in this particular situation and circumstance. The paper is now
suggesting an additional element related to ethics, but it is only relevant if knowledge of all 3
of the other aspects is satisfactory.
11. Of crucial importance is the ability to provide risk information to patients in relation to their
proposed care. This involves both the knowledge of the staff member, and their ability to
communicate. As indicated in many areas involving ionising radiations there are uncertainties.
While those involved in radiation medicine probably all follow statutory regulation
requirements in their practice, in my experience there is no unanimity of view in relation to risk
to their patients of such practice. This makes effective ethical provision of information difficult.
Perhaps the most effective way forward is for the production at international level of patient
information briefings on risk of procedures use of which are mandatory.
C J KALMAN. June 2023