I have a very modest suggestion: I think that the acronymous for the Chronic Radiation Syndrome should not be CRS - line 1955 of the draft, in order to avoid confusion with the Cutaneous Radiation Syndrome (already widely known as CRS). Perhaps ChRS instead or to call the syndrome Non-acute Radiation Syndrome (NARS) or Chronic High Dose Exposure Radiation Syndrome (CHDERS).
Yours,
Nelson Valverde